tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post1280138302381304709..comments2013-05-30T12:24:01.070-07:00Comments on Living Life Truthfully?: (dVERSE) Crowded MindsLilGypsyLaLahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17652391153661300117noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-1119029473159163732012-06-01T02:34:21.195-07:002012-06-01T02:34:21.195-07:00I got here eventually1 so sorry for my tardiness!....I got here eventually1 so sorry for my tardiness!...WOW- there is so much going on here- this certainly felt like a stream of consciousness- but almost like you are asking numerous and very deep questions of yourself and then world- the overall sense i got was one of insecurity- of committing only to get burned- particuallry within these lines<br /><br />Shake the salt shaker pour it on the wound<br />Jump back down to earth and desert the crimson moon<br />He who plays with fire will indeed get a burn<br />Just wait quietly it will be karma's turn<br /><br />Fascinating write packed full of emotionstu mcp (hate&hope)http://www.poemsofhateandhope.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-16995362252683686512012-05-29T18:00:14.271-07:002012-05-29T18:00:14.271-07:00You let er rip in this one. Fast-paced and almost ...You let er rip in this one. Fast-paced and almost frantic with a twist of anger. Awesome write, Miss Laura!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/dreaming-downhill/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-66424967327914382292012-05-29T14:12:35.682-07:002012-05-29T14:12:35.682-07:00thank you so much...sometimes my mind has so much ...thank you so much...sometimes my mind has so much to say. :)LilGypsyLaLahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17652391153661300117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-67095426208751996542012-05-29T14:07:29.367-07:002012-05-29T14:07:29.367-07:00hey Laura
so much to like about this write - th...hey Laura <br /><br />so much to like about this write - the hunger of it appeals most to my mind;<br /><br />I am your servant my vicious squire<br />Battle like a Cracken in this broken world so vile<br />Take control, release your inner beast<br /><br />raw energy and power and the soft exit is a perfectly pitched ending :DArron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-39805453906148561642012-05-29T14:06:37.328-07:002012-05-29T14:06:37.328-07:00Thank you...it was one of those days today...lolThank you...it was one of those days today...lolLilGypsyLaLahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17652391153661300117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8587884801342733149.post-49053279070183643172012-05-29T13:59:33.834-07:002012-05-29T13:59:33.834-07:00whew you whipped up a wicked pace in this...some r...whew you whipped up a wicked pace in this...some really fun lines, like...<br /><br />Costume your mind,comfort yourself<br />Put all your secrets on the dusty top shelf<br /><br />you certainly got my mind spinning through this though...smiles...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com