Tuesday, 29 May 2012

(dVERSE) Crowded Minds

Chivalry in the form of silence
Sought out to find the thief
The valiant soul throws me into violence
He who holds the key to diminishing my grief
Steps forth and through me becomes obsolete
Whimsical threads spread thin across your mind
Archaic beliefs plummeting scrimmaging to find
Like drones we seek forgiveness it basks in our crime
Shake the salt shaker pour it on the wound
Jump back down to earth and desert the crimson moon
He who plays with fire will indeed get a burn
Just wait quietly it will be karma's turn
Chiming and churning skin toiled and true
The wickedest of the wicked will come for you
Costume your mind,comfort yourself
Put all your secrets on the dusty top shelf
The higher the better
The better the higher
I am your servant my vicious squire
Battle like a Cracken in this broken world so vile
Take control, release your inner beast
As one in vision, in love we will feast
Turn your ear from the words of popularity
Reach within your crowded mind for clarity
Hold tightly to hands of reason
Fight for your power to end this bitter season
Illuminati come from darkness into light
Covens no longer under cover, but clearly in our sight
Face forward, no more masking the nasty bite
Cherry blossoms pretty and sweet
Welcome back my friend to your daily retreat



check it out http://dversepoets.com/2012/05/29/openlinknight-week-46/

6 comments:

  1. whew you whipped up a wicked pace in this...some really fun lines, like...

    Costume your mind,comfort yourself
    Put all your secrets on the dusty top shelf

    you certainly got my mind spinning through this though...smiles...

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    1. Thank you...it was one of those days today...lol

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  2. hey Laura

    so much to like about this write - the hunger of it appeals most to my mind;

    I am your servant my vicious squire
    Battle like a Cracken in this broken world so vile
    Take control, release your inner beast

    raw energy and power and the soft exit is a perfectly pitched ending :D

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    1. thank you so much...sometimes my mind has so much to say. :)

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  3. You let er rip in this one. Fast-paced and almost frantic with a twist of anger. Awesome write, Miss Laura!

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  4. I got here eventually1 so sorry for my tardiness!...WOW- there is so much going on here- this certainly felt like a stream of consciousness- but almost like you are asking numerous and very deep questions of yourself and then world- the overall sense i got was one of insecurity- of committing only to get burned- particuallry within these lines

    Shake the salt shaker pour it on the wound
    Jump back down to earth and desert the crimson moon
    He who plays with fire will indeed get a burn
    Just wait quietly it will be karma's turn

    Fascinating write packed full of emotion

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